Very vivid opening description of the Temple and the Saint.
I like the use of "mentioned to" with an object of attention. It's an interesting narrative tool.
saltating! -- never seen that word before. It's a good one.
The Tome merchant's exit was FAST. What has James gotten himself into??
The magic system is intriguing. Thank you for showing it being used instead of explaining it. Much more interesting this way.
If I were fighting James, I'd bring several boxes of Bounce...
Hmm -- I don't think using fire on a book is as obvious as James thinks it is. Its pretty counter-intuitive, so he may be the only one whose thought of it.
Thank you for the positive feedback! I do hope the contradicting descriptions between the Temple of Stone and the temples physical description also caught your eye.
Very vivid opening description of the Temple and the Saint.
I like the use of "mentioned to" with an object of attention. It's an interesting narrative tool.
saltating! -- never seen that word before. It's a good one.
The Tome merchant's exit was FAST. What has James gotten himself into??
The magic system is intriguing. Thank you for showing it being used instead of explaining it. Much more interesting this way.
If I were fighting James, I'd bring several boxes of Bounce...
Hmm -- I don't think using fire on a book is as obvious as James thinks it is. Its pretty counter-intuitive, so he may be the only one whose thought of it.
Tome of Paradise? Okay I'm hooked.
Thank you for the positive feedback! I do hope the contradicting descriptions between the Temple of Stone and the temples physical description also caught your eye.
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